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# Preparation for Camera-Ready Version

## Summary of Comments and Todos

*The italics are my thoughts.*

#### Writing

* Overview of the Interface
  * a higher-level guideline of interactions is absent
    * *make a roadmap of actions combining tasks*
* Related Work
  * "no clear novelty factor present" 
    * *survey the real need of users for network analysis*
    * *one-sentence claim that the stacking view does not appear in the literature* 
  * *Bring up the multi-resolution visualization techniques for time series* 
    * [*https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.5555/2384179.2384183*](https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.5555/2384179.2384183)
* Validation
  * Case Study: "brief"
    * *explain more on the case dataset*
  * User Test: missing
    * *user study?*
* Discussion, Future Work
  * Discussion section is lacking
    * *what more is expected from the analysts? i.e. what need is not addressed? why is it difficult to meet?*
    * *which part of the visual interpretation/interaction is hard for them?* 
    * *maybe include the discussion of the extension to other interval-based systems as mentioned by reviewer 4* [*https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.1145/3132847.3133164*](https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.1145/3132847.3133164)
  * Future work is "short and superficial"

#### User Study

* *Run a quantitative & qualitative study by asking volunteers to conduct basic operations with a timer & rate the helpfulness of the system?* 
  * *baseline: small multiples and animated node-link diagrams only for different granularities - find the outlier period as soon as possible.*
    * *components, density, ...*
* *Compare findings in the highschool dataset with other works, give detailed comments of the analysts*
* *How did the experts or analysts say about the usability and effectiveness.*

#### Figure

* enlarge Fig. 4, 5, 6  and improve the resolution
* increase the font size in Fig 2
* *try to make the figures less sketchy with a uniform style*

#### Online Version

* *modularize the source code and make a site for the project, including introduction*