Preparation for Camera-Ready Version
Summary of Comments and Todos
The italics are my thoughts.
Writing
Overview of the Interface
a higher-level guideline of interactions is absent
make a roadmap of actions combining tasks
Related Work
"no clear novelty factor present"
survey the real need of users for network analysis
one-sentence claim that the stacking view does not appear in the literature
Bring up the multi-resolution visualization techniques for time series
Validation
Case Study: "brief"
explain more on the case dataset
User Test: missing
user study?
Discussion, Future Work
Discussion section is lacking
what more is expected from the analysts? i.e. what need is not addressed? why is it difficult to meet?
which part of the visual interpretation/interaction is hard for them?
maybe include the discussion of the extension to other interval-based systems as mentioned by reviewer 4 https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.1145/3132847.3133164
Future work is "short and superficial"
User Study
Run a quantitative & qualitative study by asking volunteers to conduct basic operations with a timer & rate the helpfulness of the system?
baseline: small multiples and animated node-link diagrams only for different granularities - find the outlier period as soon as possible.
components, density, ...
Compare findings in the highschool dataset with other works, give detailed comments of the analysts
How did the experts or analysts say about the usability and effectiveness.
Figure
enlarge Fig. 4, 5, 6 and improve the resolution
increase the font size in Fig 2
try to make the figures less sketchy with a uniform style
Online Version
modularize the source code and make a site for the project, including introduction
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